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athletics

"Take your marks get set GO," yelled Mr Bron. I ran. It was all going well; me happy, me running, faster by the... "BANG!" I hit the ground very hard but fighting the pain I got up and ran as fast as I could. I wanted to transform into a kangaroo so I could bounce my way to the finish. I came second to last. Me surprised, not happy, me sore. I lay down to catch my breath. I'm still not happy anyway about my leg it sore Karina said to go back to the house tent me, disappointed in, self ,I sit in shame with, hat, over, head, me, self, relies siting here will not help me friends get good score I get up I felt fine NO! NO! not feel fine not feel fine

SPEECH

Speeches

Written and Oral Language

We are learning to:

Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately

Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically

Speech Topic:

		Self Assessment from video	Speech in front of class
Success Criteria:
Speech Writing
My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced		1/2
The point I was making was easy to understand		yes
My speech contained research		yes
My speech had voice and was interesting		yes
My speech was in my words		yes
My big idea comes through strongly		1/2
Presentation
I enunciated my words clearly		yes
Terminal consonants
Ts and ds in the middles of words
Swallowed my goobies first
Seperated my words
My voice was loud enough		yes
I learnt my speech off by heart		1/2
I used expression in my voice		yes
I used enough volume to be heard by all		yes
I used eye-contact		yes
My speech was not too fast, not too slow		yes
My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes		no
My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words		no
Total:		141/2

Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14

Self Assessment after Video

Self Assessment after Speech

term 4 pi

goal

My best vis lang

What did I learn: I learn't how to do new drawing tecnics.

What did I do well: I did the lightning very well I think.

What is my next learning step: neater hand writing.

I did well because I got spelling age 7.9 but I wasn't happy with ti

My wallet

fitenets test

I improved on everything I was timed for.
I could have done better times if I had tried a little harder.
I learnt that I could jump better than I thought I could.

trem 3 goal

1/ Stay away from people who will distract me
2/Act responsibly
3/Keep up with my deadlines.
3/

Personal Investigation Term 2

home fun compellon

I got 81 home fun compellon in sted of 70 I am very huppy!!!!!!!

Harrys multipilcation video

Visual language

I think this is my best work because I put detail into it and I liked my colouring and the pictures that I did.

cross country

I ran fast

Natures forces

This is mine and Aidans video on our prediction if our house would still be standing after a landslide.

natures forces assessment

trem one pi

Comments
Nat and Kelly
cool just cool.cool and very amazing. aidan,thomas
well done harry we thought your pi i was very intrersting we also think that you have got a very good ame and very far distance Sophie,Sara
Cool P.I Harry! We liked your booklet. Also we liked that video Corbin, Caleb
Awesome job Harry we loved the sling shot but next time try to speak a bit more clearly Maddy, Zia & Luce
Well done! We really liked the movie of that guy with the sling shot! Your P.I was awesome Kate and Libby
Emma & Hannah
nice PI harry you put lots of personallty and humor so congrats harry mike and caelum
Britt, Alana and Linda
you did very well because you brang the sling shots in well done harry Hadley Alan
great pi harry i think it was awsume natalya

My goal

I think I did will in completing my gole this yere I have been more focused on the mat but I think I need more work whene I do my work

Homefun total for term 1

My score was 70% i need to complete my homework all the time. Show more responsibility.

Addition and Subtraction Strategies

What did I learn? I learned Thomas's 'No Brakes Strategy' and the Caleb W strategy

What did I do well? I've learned about three new addition strategies and how it's easier to add when you have to subtract eg instead of 53 - 36 = ?, do 36 + ? = 53

What would I do differently next time? I could sit closer to TC when we're learning to help me concentrate on the learning.

wordle

My best visual language

test

what did i lrean?mulputian
what did i do well? number order
what is my next step comple it

Message from TC

Your ePortfolio is looking great, Harry.  Keep up the great work.

My smart.

my goal in life

averages distance throw

i loet to hod a tenes ball poalea
i woz god at happing ather pepel
i ned to throw the ball hier

Visual Language

I think my border and picture relate well to the topic.
I learnt that it needs to be more colourful
Next time I will use more colour.



Success Criteria - To improve my handwriting.

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