WOW! Cool P.I Harry! I thought that the speaking was very good and you thought of a very good topic. But next time you could not read the things of the power point. Kate
good job harry you had lots of info about the music players and you said the words where in your own words. next time look at the audience not the book.
Cool PI Harry! It was very interesting to listen to and we learnt a lot. You could have worked on having some interaction with the audience and practiced your words. Other than that it was great!
Well done Harry! I liked what you chose for your topic. I have a MP3 and It's way different to what they used to. You needed to learn your words a bit better and look at the audience a bit more though. Other than that, Well done!
Emma- well done Harrison! what you did well - you added lots of pics what I learnt - that the apple ipod was invented in 2001. what you could do better next time- add a bit of humor. Alana- What you did well - you spoke loud Next time - have a little humar WHat I learnt - That the old radios are ugly!
Interesting PI Harry, You spoke clear and loud but next time you could take the words off the power point and just have the pictures and read the words off the book. Egg, Corbin and Britt
interesting pi harry liked your topic, you spoke clearly you didn't go up to 2010.
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WOW! Cool P.I Harry! I thought that the speaking was very good and you thought of a very good topic.
ReplyDeleteBut next time you could not read the things of the power point.
Kate
good job harry
ReplyDeleteyou had lots of info about the music players and you said the words where in your own words.
next time look at the audience not the book.
Grace and Luce :)
Cool PI Harry! It was very interesting to listen to and we learnt a lot.
ReplyDeleteYou could have worked on having some interaction with the audience and practiced your words.
Other than that it was great!
By Zia and Madi
Well done Harry! I liked what you chose for your topic. I have a MP3 and It's way different to what they used to. You needed to learn your words a bit better and look at the audience a bit more though. Other than that, Well done!
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it was very interesting that you did it on radios in the past years
ReplyDeletebut maybe next time know the words a bit better
That was a good PI Harry! we liked it how you put it in your own words.But next time you could be more inforzastik.
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Emma- well done Harrison!
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what I learnt - that the apple ipod was invented in 2001.
what you could do better next time- add a bit of humor.
Alana- What you did well - you spoke loud
Next time - have a little humar
WHat I learnt - That the old radios are ugly!
that was good I liked the pictures that was intro how long it took to make a ipod
ReplyDeleteInteresting PI Harry, You spoke clear and loud
ReplyDeletebut next time you could take the words off the power point and just have the pictures and read the words off the book.
Egg, Corbin and Britt
Cool pi We think you did well you spoke clearly and you need to work on
ReplyDeleteYour words cause you did not know what they meant.
Alan and Hadley